Opening scene (metz dorm in a bedroom)
EST – Shot of outside of Metz from the back at an angle
CU - of Box with random looking objects in it. Pan across to 2 similar boxes that are closed. Person’s hand reaches for a lollipop stick in one of the boxes.
MS – Person is sitting by all these boxes and is holding a lollipop stick, looking at it and turning it. She then open’s her mouth and is about to put it in her mouth.
Scene Fade to black
Person is sitting at their Desk
WS – of classroom with about 5 people in it (conference room? Studio 1 or 2?)
POV/ Over Shoulder (MS) – Katy is looking at the people in the room
POV/ Over Shoulder (ECU) – Katy is focusing on the mouths of people as they talk
Pan/ Cut to POV/ Over Shoulder (ECU) – Katy is Focusing on someone eating a granola Bar
Pan/ Cut to POV/ Over Shoulder (ECU) – Katy is watching someone drink from a water bottle. Someone walks in front of this scene and sits down in the seat next to her, blocking her view.
MS – Of this new person (Amanda) sitting down next to Katy.
Pan/ Cut to POV/ Over Shoulder (ECU) – Katy watching Amanda’s mouth as she sucks on a lollipop. Amanda then turns to face Katy.
Pan/ Cut to POV/ Over Shoulder (BS) – Hi, morning
MS (from Katy’s of the convo) – A - ‘Morning’.
Katy then looks forward and then a bit later looks back at Amanda. ‘
K - Do you have any more?’ pointing towards the lollipop
A - ‘uh huh’
MS (different angle) - Amanda reaches into pocket and grabs a lollipop and hands it to Katy who makes a face at it.
K – Allergic to (insert fruit type here)
BS – Amanda thinks and then asks
A – How about Grape?
BS – K - Grape’s good
BS – Amanda removes Lollipop from her mouth and…
MS – Hands it to Katy
POV/Over Shoulder – Katy looks at it for a bit before taking it and putting it in her mouth. She looks up and sees Amanda putting the other lollipop in her mouth.
MS – Katy holds out hand
K- Katy
Amanda looks down at hand before smiling and grasping it
A: Amanda, nice to meet you.
Cut to black
WS – Katy and Amanda are talking while eating lunch
MS – Katy Drops her fork while talking. She pauses, looks at it for a second before picking it up and putting it aside.
MS – Amanda just finished putting a stick of gum in her mouth and reaches for her used fork and hands it over.
MS - Katy thanks her, takes the fork and continues eating.
WS – They’ve finished eating and get up to throw garbage away.
Over Shoulder of X (WS) – Person sees Katy putting fork in her pocket
MS – Katy Turns around to see if anyone saw and makes eye contact with someone.
BS-WS – Her eyes widen but she turns around and walks away with Amanda
Cut to Black
WS - Amanda is in a kitchen with a couple of stacked boxes around.
MS – She has a cup of water and begins to drink it as Katy enters the dorm/house
CU – Amanda drinking water
MS- Amanda finishes water, puts cup in sink and walking off.
Katy walks into frame and picks up cup. She looks at it.
MS – Katy Refills cup with water.
CU – Katy drinks from cup and is then startled.
WS – Another roommate just entered the house carrying a box and walks into her room.
MS – Katy drops cup in sink and walks away
Cut to black
WS panning – Katy and Amanda walk towards Camera talking. Katy has a popsicle she just finished and throws away into a garbage on the way. As they pass it the camera follows them. Outside a classroom Katy stops and acts like she forgot something.
MS – K- I’ll be right back, ok?
A – yea, just don’t be late.
WS – Katy walks towards camera.
MS – She Stands in front of the garbage can looking around. She see no one and reaches into the garbage,
POV/Over Shoulder – Person watching Katy going into the Garbage
MS – Katy pulls out a popsicle stick, turns around and sees someone watching her. She is startled and rushes back into the classroom after pocketing the popsicle stick.
Cut to black
CU – Hands holding a plastic bag and fiddling with it.
MS – Katy is on her bed holding a plastic bag . You hear a door close and she stands up and walks to her door
WS – a door in an empty hall way opens and Katy’s head peaks out and looks up and down the hallway. She sees no one and walks into the bathroom, closing the door behind her.
MS – In the bathroom the glass is all fogged up. Katy looks at a toothbrush and picks it up, running her thumb over the bristles.
MSShe puts the brush down and goes into bag she brought with her and pulls out an identical toothbrush in it’s packaging and takes it out and puts it in place of the old toothbrush. She picks up the old toothbrush again, runs her fingers over the bristles one more time before putting it in her pocket.
MS - She turns around and leaves the bathroom. As she exits the bathroom her other roommate is there waiting and enters.
Fade to black
WS - Katy is sitting in her room, surrounded but those few boxes again and holding a toothbrush, fingers running over the bristles.
CU – She reaches for one of the lip balms in a corner of the box
BS – She applies it to her lips and replaces it. She then sighs.
WS – She stands up and puts all the boxes into one stack and then picks them up and walks out her room.
Cut to black
WS - Katy walks towards the garbage with the boxes and puts them down.
MS – Grabbing the top most box she starts to lift the top of the garbage to dump it when she notices someone stooping down beside her looking through one of the boxes.
POV/Over Shoulder – Amanda looks up at camera/Katy and says with a smirk
A – I never said I wanted you to stop
BS – Katy looks down at Amanda, horrified
Cut to black
WS- Amanda is looking through a crack in her bedroom door in a towel. Katy walk in front of her to her bedroom with a toothbrush sticking out of her pocket. Amanda smirks and walks further into her room.
Cut to Black
MS – Amanda is standing right inside a door for a couple of seconds before turning around and looking out the door
Over Shoulder – Amanda sees Katy reaching into the garbage
MS – Amanda walks back into the classroom and takes her seat. Then smiles at Katy as she enters the classroom out of breath.
Cut to black
MS – Amanda is looking at the door until she hears someone start to open it and then starts to drink the cup of water in her hand. She puts the cup in the sink and the walks away.
Over shoulder – Amanda sees Katy drinking from her cup and then continues walking down the hallway to her room.
Cut to black
MS - As Katy looks at the person to her left Amanda looks at the fork in Katy’s back pocket, smiles and then continues walking.
Cut to black
Over shoulder - Amanda watches from the doorway and Katy looks at people in the classroom.
MS – She’s holding about 6 lollipops in her hand. She puts 4 of those 6 in her bag and puts 1 in her hoodie pocket.
BS – She Unwraps the lollipop and puts it in her mouth and then walks into the classroom.
WS – She walks in front of where Katy’s looking and sits beside her.
BS – Amanda smiles as she says hi to Katy, her head tilting to the side as she says it.
Cut to Black
END
Breakdown the Script
The theme is temptation. Katy has been stalking her best friend, Amanda for a couple of months now. She has collected objects that belong to her and stores them all in boxes. Afraid of being found out by one of her roommates she decides to get rid of her collection. She goes through the box for a final time and has multiple flash backs starting from when Katy and Amanda just met to the first time Katy stole Amanda's toothbrush. While down by the garbage disposal Amanda sees Katy and starts going through the boxes. As Katy stands in shock Amanda looks at her and says she never wanted her to stop (meaning stop the stalking) Then you go back through all the flash backs that you had previously seen and see that Amanda knew exactly what was happening and watched while it happened. The last scene is of when Amanda and Katy first met and you see that Amanda somewhat made the relationship happen the way it did.
Logistics
2 main actors (screen time about 4-6 minutes) 6-7 scenes
1 minor actor (screen time about 30 seconds to 1 minute) 5 scenes
4-5 extras (screen time from 5 seconds to 20 seconds) 1-2 scenes each
7 locations used
Six sets of clothing for each actor where used. 'Stalker Box and contents ie. toothbrushes, popsicle sticks, lip balm, lip gloss, etc.
Shooting done on;
Sunday 5pm-12am (midnight)
Tuesday 9pm-2am
Over head maps of used locations
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